Hm

SpaceGirl823 August 8, 2020 3:34 pm

The fact that they made her mother look so love sick for her kid gives me the creeps. Mainly because everyone knows there's something wrong with Lippe and before she used to hide it but now she's too smart for her age and it's super sus. It's boring when the protag doesn't face any kind of trails to test them. She always wins and that's boring.

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    CandyCone21 August 8, 2020 3:41 pm

    Finally someone that gets it! This is one of my problems with a lot of shoujo mangas. They make the protagonist invincible that all the problems they face gets boring. Besides I think a great villain counterpart makes the story even better. Like Batman and the joker, great pair and both are loved.

    Lucia August 8, 2020 4:51 pm
    Finally someone that gets it! This is one of my problems with a lot of shoujo mangas. They make the protagonist invincible that all the problems they face gets boring. Besides I think a great villain counterpar... CandyCone21

    It’s not as if she’s invincible it’s just she’s talking with good people in the story, like with the tutor the only way she got out of the situation was because the lady (forgot her name) was on her side and plus he nearly hit her so she used that to her advantage. Also with the other lady who abuses her kids, the duke’s son stepped in to help her. Then there’s also her brothers, she’s not doing this on her own it’s the people she surrounded herself around in this life who are there to help her when she’s dealing with bad people.

    CandyCone21 August 8, 2020 7:36 pm
    It’s not as if she’s invincible it’s just she’s talking with good people in the story, like with the tutor the only way she got out of the situation was because the lady (forgot her name) was on her sid... Lucia

    It always status off like this but when the "big boss" comes to play. I guarantee that she will defeat that person easily. That the major problem or the major villain would be lame and appears to be easily solvable. Point blank it's not well written.

    Lucia August 10, 2020 4:42 am
    It always status off like this but when the "big boss" comes to play. I guarantee that she will defeat that person easily. That the major problem or the major villain would be lame and appears to be easily solv... CandyCone21

    If she doesn’t defeat the big boss, her dad dies is that what you want? And then it’s a repeat of what happened at the beginning. The whole story is her building up her strength, she’s not going to defeat the big boss by herself I guarantee the duke’s son (later on the duke) would be the one standing by her side to bring him down. Also don’t forget this isn’t a normal story, a supernatural being brought her back because she was at a really sad point in her life and they couldn’t bear to hear her sad song so ofc it’s going to be like that.

    Yoousung August 10, 2020 7:22 am
    It always status off like this but when the "big boss" comes to play. I guarantee that she will defeat that person easily. That the major problem or the major villain would be lame and appears to be easily solv... CandyCone21

    But it has not happened yet . yes there are stories like this but no 2 are exactly the same. You cant guarantee nothing say that this is bad writeing is flat out rude if you dont like it so much then stop reading

    CandyCone21 August 10, 2020 9:23 am
    But it has not happened yet . yes there are stories like this but no 2 are exactly the same. You cant guarantee nothing say that this is bad writeing is flat out rude if you dont like it so much then stop readi... Yoousung

    The main reason I can say this is because it's following a formula and it's not doing anything new plot wise. Plus I didn't say I didn't like it but just because I like something doesn't mean it great. This is just something I enjoy I enjoy spending a few minutes it if the week reading. Nothing rude about saying something is bad and giving a justifiable reason for it. It's called criticism. That's how works authors and works get better. If people continue saying only the positive things and never the negative these things will continue to repeat. That's a fact!

    CandyCone21 August 10, 2020 9:36 am
    If she doesn’t defeat the big boss, her dad dies is that what you want? And then it’s a repeat of what happened at the beginning. The whole story is her building up her strength, she’s not going to defeat... Lucia

    Being super natural or having super natural help does not give you a free pass in making life easy. It's like replaying a video game you won, it's easier yes but you can still struggle/fail at times. I'm concerned that she is not going to have any struggles or conflicts. That doesn't mean I want her family to die but I just don't want her to continue to be all knowing, super genius that all her decisions are right and that everything just falls into her lap. It's not natural, it's not human and using the excuse of magic/time travel is just cheap. Not all manga is like that but there is a surplus of it in the shoujo genre.