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That what makes the story more interesting! This story has a great plot and twist. Don't you think it's nice once in a while to see a different story ? ٩(๑❛ᴗ❛๑)۶
Sure, but I feel like the story was meant to go deeper. The fact that the story was hasten, somehow it portrayed as shallow. It leaves a frustrating after taste 'cause the story was just getting good.
Its so bad in so many ways. Maybe,
It could have been saved if it you extended the story. The story in itself was twisted.