The pacing.

Zealot_crazer August 21, 2020 1:50 pm

The way the artist has shown the story makes it lacking in terms of structure. I can't figure a lot of things out.

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    lgmariaeduarda August 22, 2020 6:21 pm

    Me too. He/she is probably a rookie mangaka so I think it will get better with time.