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Thanks for this comment because I put this on hold for a while exactly for that reason ^^^ now it’s completed I’m gonna see what happened. Even tho everyone in the comments said this had an unfinished feeling at least I know with what emotion to finish this with now. Thanks
Awwwwe. It was no problem
It was off to a good start. I smelled something fishy when his father came into the picture.
I hate when authors do crap like this. Made me depressed for a little bit. So annoying. Not to mention she's a minor and the dad was a little touchy feely. Like...FBI where you at? I feel so bad for the ML. He didn't even deserve that. She should've just stayed away. Plot twists aren't always a good idea. This is evidence of that. Disgusting and disappointing.