hmm

ryn August 29, 2020 7:51 pm

i feel like this could be really good if the translation is bettered. because i can’t really get what is going on sometimes.

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    Ikus August 30, 2020 7:35 am

    Be thankful that we r getting these updates for free uwu. Also, ur grammar needs to be better too lmao

    ryn August 30, 2020 10:41 am
    Be thankful that we r getting these updates for free uwu. Also, ur grammar needs to be better too lmao Ikus

    dude i was talking casually. i’m an english major lmao. i’m not criticising them. honestly if proofreading is required, i don’t mind doing it. i was just offering feedback because it’ll be more enjoyable to read.

    Turbofan August 30, 2020 11:26 am
    dude i was talking casually. i’m an english major lmao. i’m not criticising them. honestly if proofreading is required, i don’t mind doing it. i was just offering feedback because it’ll be more enjoyabl... ryn

    OOF

    Kash August 31, 2020 6:02 am

    Same.... Well my eng is bad so I thought that I am the only one who didn't got it....

    JulietClaire August 31, 2020 11:44 pm
    dude i was talking casually. i’m an english major lmao. i’m not criticising them. honestly if proofreading is required, i don’t mind doing it. i was just offering feedback because it’ll be more enjoyabl... ryn

    My English is not good too but I think "bettered" isnt a word. And the second sentence, "don't" should've been used instead of "can't" but I am not an English major so maybe you are right.

    Ikus September 1, 2020 4:30 am
    My English is not good too but I think "bettered" isnt a word. And the second sentence, "don't" should've been used instead of "can't" but I am not an English major so maybe you are right. JulietClaire

    Your grammar corrections are correct, so no, your english seems good!

    ryn September 1, 2020 4:48 am
    My English is not good too but I think "bettered" isnt a word. And the second sentence, "don't" should've been used instead of "can't" but I am not an English major so maybe you are right. JulietClaire

    lmao i just said i was typing casually? clearly you’re nitpicking and haven’t read anything afterward. plus, bettered IS a word. i’d suggest that you actually look it up before you denounce it.

    Kash September 1, 2020 5:16 am
    lmao i just said i was typing casually? clearly you’re nitpicking and haven’t read anything afterward. plus, bettered IS a word. i’d suggest that you actually look it up before you denounce it. ryn

    Let it slide already.......... U don't have to justify yourself to anyone........ Just enjoy your time reading the story.... (●'◡'●)ノ

    JulietClaire September 1, 2020 11:21 am
    lmao i just said i was typing casually? clearly you’re nitpicking and haven’t read anything afterward. plus, bettered IS a word. i’d suggest that you actually look it up before you denounce it. ryn

    Ooohh. It is a word. But seriously? The way the sentences are constructed in the manhua, you will get how the story flows. Is it really that bad or you just cant comprehend it?