
So you need to see explicit drawing of people being murder to understand that they're being murder? Cause apart from the violent scenes the other ones are clear, as long as you can understand what is happening in the plot itself then that's enough, you have dialogues, eyes, I feel like you're just making up excuses for not reading something that you just ain't familiar with

No, actually, I just have trouble distinguishing the images from each other in ALL the panels. And I actually would prefer more explicit drawings, emphasize the colors of the blood and bruises but ease back on everything else, especially skin pigment-would really improve it in my opinion. I love this kind of stuff, but it’s hard to find, so when I can’t even see what’s going on that’s very disappointing. As I previously stated, I think this story would do better as a book with a few drawing sprinkled in.

I understand that you would prefer it to be more bright, but that's someone's artstyle, it's like saying "oh I would prefer Tarantino's movies to be less violent" I for instance would prefer for the characters of the works of "brother's without a tomorrow" to have smaller lips and bodies, most of them look like beefy ducks to me but I won't criticise because that doesn't affect the story/plot and the story is the main reason why im here (if it was art I would be reading Berserk or any other shounen cause the art is WAY better then any yaoi ever made). Even tho I think some yaois could be different, as someone who also draws, I have utterly respected for the fact that the author was able to come up with her own style, with a trademark, etc. I love to live in a art world where we have so many options and I feel like we can def criticise plot and stories but when it comes to artstyles that's just personal preference and it's disrespectful to say "I can't understand wtf is going on" when you clearly CAN but would rather have that information delivered to you in other artstyle. I've read this manga in Spanish and I honestly feel like the dark artwork fits the plot perfectly and I didn't had any issues while reading it, the most confusing part is the timeline, not the art, but like the other girl also said, if someone prefers more stereotypical mangas they have the right to do so

You have no idea how much it pisses me off when somebody doesn’t believe me when I’m telling the truth. Gah, I hate false accusations. I actually cannot see, I really can’t, please I’m literally begging you to believe me. Stop putting words into my mouth, I love violence and gore, in fact I think I love it to too much because if I see romance listed for the genre, I won’t read it. It absolutely isn’t about the story, the story seems really great from what I could put together, but being satisfied with it would be like being satisfied with the summary of a story. It especially bothers me because I am the type of person to look at every detail of a picture before moving on. I won’t even blame the art style, idk if I even did previously, because my whole life I’ve had trouble like that, even with things in reality. The amount of words you put into my mouth and assumptions you made about me as a person, and how you either ignored parts of what I said or claimed it wasn’t true, proves that you are just looking to be offended.

"Looking to be offended" geez chill the fuck out, to begin with you're the one that first showed up on my comment offended by it. My point with the comment was: maybe you can't see full detail in the scene of the lady being murdered or all the scenes (like you said) but you still can understand what's going on in the scene or you want to tell me that you couldn't comprehend that the blonde dude was killing that woman? For me, and that's me, I don't need full detail, actually I agree a lot with what the other girl said, that it can even objectify the victim to have gore scenes in detail. Theres a lot of coments about being darker than normal and they were the ones I was talking about, but if you can't see anything about any part and all your life's been like that I don't know what to tell you, is like a made a comment "don't criticize the artstyle just cause is darker then you're used to, you still can understand with dialogues" and you came here with "Im blind and theres nothing that I can do" like df im supposed to say? "Oh thats sad"? My comment whats about people not being familiar with this type of art, not people who have trouble seeing things in real life, I honesty don't know why you felt like my comment fit your case, the other girl also thought you just didn't liked the style and suggested other mangas and agreed with my comment about people not being familiar with other styles, cause we literally thought you just had trouble with the artstyle and not that you had real trouble seeing things all your life (you also said that the author should change this and that in the art, what made me belive even more that your problem was with the art). Look its 8am and I didn't left this comment with intentions to pick up a fight, I just wanted to say that all artists have their own styles and that this level of darkness is normal for many comics or graphic novels out there and maybe that's why fujoshis aren't familiar with it

Mmmmmmmm oh my god first read, I was like “ah that was chill but the last part was a little rude” but the more I reread it the more I see wrong with it. Let me break this down for ya.
I’m gonna give you the benefit of the doubt and believe it was just a misunderstanding. My reply was “Bro but my eyes literally can’t separate the images to tell what the fuck is going though I’d rather this be a book with a few images sprinkled in.” I wasn’t offended I just thought that you didn’t get what people were saying, and that you seriously couldn’t get it was just difficult to read. I was defending the fact that it isn’t about what you were saying at all, and the darkness, more absurd way of drawing things, and lack of color, made it hard to identify the images. I don’t think I could understand the dialogue either. I just didn’t see it necessary to explain that much.
Man, again, as I said before, it doesn’t matter if I understand the basics of what happened detail is literally what makes a story most of the time. And your point didn’t come across well in the slightest bit to me-if by first you mean the original post by you. It came across extremely rude and you seemed to be making a lot of assumptions.
I think partly that it’s not just my bad eyesight though, clearly many other people couldn’t see what was happening.
Might I just add that it’s literally a comic, you don’t read a comic for dialogue, it could be even considered lesser if the dialogue is unnatural enough that it literally tells the whole story for you. You read comics for the pictures AND dialogue.
I really think it isn’t about it just not being what they are used to, I think the darkness really is a problem. A lot of people read for story, and descriptions of what the hell is happening other than “she was killed by a bad scary dude” or whatever isn’t enough. We barely get any truly gore or graphic horror comics, and that can be part of the fun. It’s just usually horror movies are live action so they aren’t as disturbing as these drawings.
I think that the authors intention was to be disturbing, and graphic, but they can’t really do that if they fill so much up of the drawing with blocks of darkness.
I didn’t say the author needs to change it, I said that that would be the best thing and I really liked that idea, but what I’d really like is them to just clear up all the blocks of black and such-maybe make the separation lines more clear.
And finally the last part of what you said, which was so bad and rude, like c’mon man you made so much progress and you just had to say something like that. It sounds like you really think all these people are just fujoshis who like nothing but fluffy comics, and you (mostly in your original post) ignored or thought that they were just wrong about it being hard to see because one or two people can see it.

Don't beg a bitch on here its unbecoming anyway boo I feel I'm loving this story and I feel where you are coming from. I love looking at crime scene photos and things of that nature the gorey the better to be honest. I feel like this person is trying to make it seem like you want some fluffy shit which that is not what you are saying at all. While the art style is interesting and unique they are heavy handed on the black lines which takes away from the murder scenes or violent scenes. Which come on who wouldn't want to see lmao this person probably thought Killing Stalking was amazing . But can't no not is not willing to see where you are coming from. Anyway hopefully the scenes will become a little clearer for those who really like unvirtuous scenes! Stay strong !
So many people complaining about the art but it's just because you guys only read pretty and cute manga/webtoon style, there's a bunch of real adult graphic novels or comics with this "dark" and distorted way of drawing. I loved it, to me everything that is unique is better than these mainstream "clear" mangas that don't even have backgrounds or true facial expressions besides surprise, pleasure or sadness