i kinda wonder how they easily change on what they call each other. cause they known each other for like 18 years(?)
I was actually wondering about that too
Oops, meant a thumbs down, my bad. ╮(￣▽￣)╭
some of your point make sense. but i think the reincarnation is there so these two can think a bit maturely and, well, created problems for the story. because if they are actually a what, 6 years old, they wouldn't think this critical and there will be no problems in the story
Lmao your pretty salty
You would be surprised how smart 6 yr old can be when raised in an abusive environment.
A person I know has one of their parents not care for their existence and their other parent is a nutjob that can't take care of them or their siblings. Them and their siblings have been taking care of each other all their lives.
Like the idea is killer but it came out pretty bad.
1. No point for the reincarnation thing, they dont use their past lives knowledge for anything. It's just there.
2. They don't act like adults at all. They act like their 9-11 range. Things that they couldve done with their adult brains to fix multiple problems in this story wasn't used at all.
3. The story is way to slow, there is barely any progress in the story. They take things to slow and they keep the same problems the same, with misunderstandings from simple things like fucking miscommunication.
4. The main characters are kinda bland, they barely have any personality. Like compare them to the family who have traits that define them. Then you see them...theyre twins... thats cool... Like they don't have anything that defines them they're just the common human being. They aren't athetic, aren't smart, they're not powerful, they don't have a unique trait that sets them apart.