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I think the story itself is really good but ts and tl can be improved. It has potential!
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I think the story itself is really good but ts and tl can be improved. It has potential!
At first i was really drawn to the story but now i don't know. It's sorta confusing and i cant feel the sincerity of their feelings from both parts. The fact that he killed all those alphas but no one is saying anything also kinda bothers me but i don't know