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tbh i dont understand what i even read at times in the chapters. better than some other translators but this needs a proof reader.
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tbh i dont understand what i even read at times in the chapters. better than some other translators but this needs a proof reader.
The spelling and grammar is honestly not that great. It isn't really unreadable but when I read it, It's annoying and I have to fill in the blanks. They keep leaving words out and so then I'm just trying to reread it and figure out what a word means. My first language is english so when it's this hard to read, Yikesss. Also I feel like the love isn't normal. I feel like the love just suddenly bloomed for the sake of it blooming. There wasn't really any development in it. I was super duper excited about this but now I'm just a bit disappointed by how much it's lacking. There's also so much that's lacking in the backstory of Amy and Diane and I'm just like ┗( T﹏T )┛ WhhyyyYYyyYy-