this story has a really unique plot but i dont think it was executed properly? strangely, i feel detached to the characters for some reason. it’s not boring, per se, but each scene (esp the transitions from one to another) is too abrupt. i sincerely feel like the author didnt do a good job in establishing the characters’ emotions which kept me from feeling for them. almost like there’s this barrier between the characters and the reader lol.
the art style is nice tho and im still gonna keep reading to see if the execution of the story is going to improve
While I completely understand what you mean, I respectfully disagree. I LOVE THEM SO MUCH ESPECIALLY NOX. CANT EVEN PICK A FAVORITE NOX BECAUSE THEY. ARE. BOTH. SO. CUTE!!!!
Yea I think so too. But it is rather understandable tho I mean we arent geniuses, we werent born to walk right after. I think there is room for improvement and I hope the artist and storyboard writer will get better in time :')
Yea I think so too. But it is rather understandable tho I mean we arent geniuses, we werent born to walk right after. I think there is room for improvement and I hope the artist and storyboard writer will get b... Nado
yep i feel like they’re skipping so many necessary details in the story just for the sake of pushing the romance between the main characters quickly. i hope they’ll explore more on the details in the future chapters instead of just touching on it briefly !!
this story has a really unique plot but i dont think it was executed properly? strangely, i feel detached to the characters for some reason. it’s not boring, per se, but each scene (esp the transitions from one to another) is too abrupt. i sincerely feel like the author didnt do a good job in establishing the characters’ emotions which kept me from feeling for them. almost like there’s this barrier between the characters and the reader lol.
the art style is nice tho and im still gonna keep reading to see if the execution of the story is going to improve