Ugh

TachibanaChiharu September 28, 2020 11:50 pm

This nice art with amazing uncensoring is wasted on a junk rape-to-love plot involving hosts (geez I'm so tired of hosts) full of stereotypes and cliches.

I was really hoping for a more entertaining experience with a pee fetish going on here, but it really wasn't showcased visually that much and was mostly only used to transition the seme to "normal" sex later since the uke was able to get him off without any peeing going on. I mean at least the story never forgot about it. But so much missed opportunity for geyers or sprinklers of peeing spraying all over the walls and furniture, or peeing in the butthole, or just anything more interesting than pissing on the floor with a dick up your butt. May as well just be cum if that's all you're gonna do with it.

Also, the plot is really basic. Seme treats uke like a possession because uke is able to give him a stiffy whereas other people can't lately, and uke just sits there and takes it while scowling at seme afterwards. It's characterized as because the uke makes cute faces when he's getting violated/humiliated, not really because his peeing is particularly hot. Anyway. Then the author tries to cram in an "oh the seme is actually a nice guy (cough even though he raped the uke several times at the beginning of the story cough)" backtracking arc for all the groans.

(caveat: I only skimmed the last 3 chapters because I was bored to death of the plot and characters; the most interesting character wast he yakuza guy who doesn't hardly get any screen time and is mostly used for cliche purposes)

Responses
    cutosenseiii September 29, 2020 8:14 pm

    the fact that u actually gave a whole ass essay for a yaoi manhwa...i-
    its cool and alll but idk..lol
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