Um...I find the story nice, but...how should I say this...it's all over the place? Like, ...

Hopeless_shipper October 3, 2020 9:04 am

Um...I find the story nice, but...how should I say this...it's all over the place?

Like, helios suddenly "died" or something and was replaced by an emo wannabe dumbass, I was already confused as is, but then she is struck by a mermaid and goes into a secret realm?

What even is that, anyway? Did she travel into another universe? The past? Is she looking into her memories? What the hells going on???

Responses
    WHY_N000T October 3, 2020 2:59 pm

    I have the same questions but in the other hand i like having them Kdkf i like this messy story