Lots of plotholes, not enough clarity or info
i do agree, i would have liked some things to be clearer, but i also wonder if it was intentional? the whole situation in the story is very unsettling, so maybe by not giving the reader all the information, the reader also feels that instability and discomfort.
or maybe its because the information wasn't necessary. like the stalker's past and motives don't really matter, because at the end of the day all he is is a crazy stalker, so he doesn't deserve to have the privilege of having his actions justified.
or the writer just didn't do that good lol. i wish i could know those things, but i have to admit that despite the mystery and missing pieces, something about this story draws me in. everything feels so unsure, but i still like it. i guess the best stories might not be the most perfect ones
sorry you probably didn't want an essay to your comment i just started to ramble ><
No I loved it! You spoke my mind and I love your insight! Maybe the mystery and the discomfort created was intentional, which would still be a pretty good idea unless they wanna fill the story with murky details, again I wish there was more clarity on the stalker and the other guy being friends or sm but smh.
thank u! and yeah that other guy is possibly even more confusing to me, and it makes me wonder how him and the stalker met? the only thing i can imagine is a club for being weirdly obsessive and harassing the people you're interested in lol
which brings me back to how similar they are, and how similar both couples are personality-wise and looks-wise. light haired persistent dude + wishy washy blacked haired guy. it really weirds me out, because based on other characters, the author can definitely differentiate characters and make them look unique, so why are the 4 mains so alike?!!?
hm this was interesting, but i still have a lot of questions. im gonna number my thoughts here we go
1. i feel like up to the end we still never really know who the stalker guy IS. like we see his appearance, but who was he before hyunsung, and how did he even find him? the other dude saw his guy on the train i guess, how did our stalker dude find MC?
2. it was kind of weird to me how the two couples look almost identical. what purpose did the second couple serve? they kinda seemed to just...be there lol
3. im not sure if this is a happy ending...i don't think by the end hyunsung loved his stalker back. ultimately hyunsung's pity for his stalker allowed him to come into hyunsung's life. foot in the door technique, once he did that, it was easier for the stalker to just push more and more boundaries. and hyunsung just accepted the situation. or should i say, he was *forced* to accept it. he never had the choice to Not have the stalker in his life, so it was either adapt or suffer.