Started Off Good, but...

MickeyGreeen October 6, 2020 6:52 pm

Okay. The story of the first pair made sense and flowed in a logical manner. The second generation though.... I'm not sure if the translation quality degraded, but it's so damn difficult to follow. Ionno what the hell is happening half the time.

Responses
    Angeween October 6, 2020 11:07 pm

    Well I understand perfectly well maybe you should try reading again.

    MickeyGreeen October 7, 2020 12:51 am
    Well I understand perfectly well maybe you should try reading again. Angeween

    No need for the snarky tone. The writing quality is subpar compared to the first season. Characters are randomly introduced, conflicts accumulate without meaningful resolutions, and pacing is inconsistent. I understand the gist, of course, but my comment is moreso a critique of the storyline.

    Water October 7, 2020 7:02 am
    No need for the snarky tone. The writing quality is subpar compared to the first season. Characters are randomly introduced, conflicts accumulate without meaningful resolutions, and pacing is inconsistent. I un... MickeyGreeen

    It is the translation. This is not the official translation. Don't judge quickly....

    Angeween October 7, 2020 5:20 pm
    No need for the snarky tone. The writing quality is subpar compared to the first season. Characters are randomly introduced, conflicts accumulate without meaningful resolutions, and pacing is inconsistent. I un... MickeyGreeen

    I didn't mean to have a tone, I love the story so I got defensive, and I think some of it is because of translation. Though, I will admit the story is more rushed than the first but I personally prefer this one to the other.

    MickeyGreeen October 7, 2020 11:31 pm
    I didn't mean to have a tone, I love the story so I got defensive, and I think some of it is because of translation. Though, I will admit the story is more rushed than the first but I personally prefer this one... Angeween

    Yah, I understand. I apologize as well; it's difficult to tell someone's intention through text.