My. Goodess.

ItzTinSeL October 7, 2020 6:34 am

This is actually...a terrible read. The FL. Is awfully structured.

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    suckadick October 8, 2020 7:02 pm

    I’m curious as to what makes you think that?

    ItzTinSeL October 8, 2020 10:25 pm
    I’m curious as to what makes you think that? suckadick

    Man that's a very broad question...to make a rant short the female lead...is like a bad actor who got a really good role. She doesn't compliment a potentially good 'villainess gone good' plot.

    She also contradicts at every barrier so in stead of expanding her frame of mind...SHE GETS STUMPED. EVERY. TIME. And it's done so much that there is an obvious pattern to the point where it's predictable. Everything she thinks, that she can potentially say out loud and drive the story forward she INSTEAD keeps it internalized and instead sounds slow as all hell. Her passive personality is what destroys the original villainess's intensity which demolishes the overall structure of a potentially amazing "I'm not gonna die in this life, so let's get crazy with it" type if plot.

    And finally, she can't control her emotions so she blushes at literally EVERY GOD DAMN THING. And handles things so immaturely despite being a grown ass adult... IT HURTS THIS POOR READERS SOUL TO READ SOMETHING SO LACKING IN FLAVOR. That is it. That is all.

    suckadick October 8, 2020 10:33 pm
    Man that's a very broad question...to make a rant short the female lead...is like a bad actor who got a really good role. She doesn't compliment a potentially good 'villainess gone good' plot. She also contradi... ItzTinSeL

    ohhh ok that makes sense. I was honestly feeling that. The plot had so much potential but instead we get the “villainess” who blushes at everything and over just a boring character. I also found it so annoying when she just wouldn’t say what’s on her mind. Yea honestly she was such a let down. The plot had so much potential but eh.

    Yoongi’s idk October 8, 2020 10:36 pm
    Man that's a very broad question...to make a rant short the female lead...is like a bad actor who got a really good role. She doesn't compliment a potentially good 'villainess gone good' plot. She also contradi... ItzTinSeL

    Well go off then.... shit

    ItzTinSeL October 8, 2020 10:37 pm
    ohhh ok that makes sense. I was honestly feeling that. The plot had so much potential but instead we get the “villainess” who blushes at everything and over just a boring character. I also found it so annoy... suckadick

    Right exactly...uuughh i want to give it a chance but i hate wasting time...

    ItzTinSeL October 8, 2020 10:39 pm
    Well go off then.... shit Yoongi’s idk

    I know right, i tried to keep it as short as possible. Nit picking is tiresome....

    Anon October 10, 2020 7:25 pm
    Man that's a very broad question...to make a rant short the female lead...is like a bad actor who got a really good role. She doesn't compliment a potentially good 'villainess gone good' plot. She also contradi... ItzTinSeL

    Lol true tho, or maybe I just (maybe you too) prefer my villaness's personality or actions to be more villainous than just "oh wow I was reincarnated as a villainess? Time to be a good girl I guess~" The first time reading this kind of plot is cute, but after awhile it's starting to what you said "lack in flavor"

    I much prefer villainess plot stories like "The Villainess Reverses The Hourglass", I hope I find more stories like that, or maybe much more better villainess plots.


    Don't get me wrong, I'm still going to continue reading this, but I'm just staying for the boys~ lol

    ItzTinSeL October 10, 2020 8:02 pm
    Lol true tho, or maybe I just (maybe you too) prefer my villaness's personality or actions to be more villainous than just "oh wow I was reincarnated as a villainess? Time to be a good girl I guess~" The first ... Anon

    THEN PLEASE READ SHADOW QUEEN RIGHT NOW.

    The female lead will truly make you tremble. I'm so proud i found it because it is exactly what authors should strive to make their female characters think and act like in a desperate scenario and/or time period.

    PLEASE YOU WILL NOT BE DISAPPOINTED.

    ItzTinSeL October 10, 2020 8:05 pm
    Lol true tho, or maybe I just (maybe you too) prefer my villaness's personality or actions to be more villainous than just "oh wow I was reincarnated as a villainess? Time to be a good girl I guess~" The first ... Anon

    I also really enjoy "The Villainess Reverses The Hourglass" and Shadow Queen is definitely on par with. Art, fl, plot and all.

    Anon October 11, 2020 11:52 am
    I also really enjoy "The Villainess Reverses The Hourglass" and Shadow Queen is definitely on par with. Art, fl, plot and all. ItzTinSeL

    Oooo yeah shadow queen is on my list still havent read it though, but i should probably read it now coz im out of real villainess's

    ItzTinSeL October 18, 2020 7:02 am
    Oooo yeah shadow queen is on my list still havent read it though, but i should probably read it now coz im out of real villainess's Anon

    I'm still on the search for good stories feel free to ya know either follow me or chat with me....CAUSE MY GUT SAYS WE'LL GET THE FUCK ALONG.