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Yeah, i feel like the story has a lot of potential but it’s really complex. It seems good from as far as my confused brain can tell, but execution really is key. And in this case, the author seems to like “showing” rather than “telling” but for these types of stories you need both so the readers can at least get an idea of what’s going on
was the author on acid while writing the story for this LMFAOOO