I don't understand what you found wrong. The translations are really good and this is an official English release by Webnovel.
what i dont understand is how you didnt find anything wrong... the translation is practically only a bit better than machine translation and some parts of the conversation doesnt make sense at all. like as i was reading, i dont understand what the characters trying to convey. it even gets to the point that i had to just blank out all the conversations and just enjoy the arts.
no offense to you honey, for being able to understand all those translations but for me, this translation is worth 4/10 to 5/10 at most. its half baked. shame on them for making this as official translation when its obvious they are making such an half assed job about it.
I don't see a problem with it either. Other than some awkward words it's good.
this is a very promising story that was scarred by the translation... dear translator, pls find an editor to help u. i have a massive headache bingeing the whole story.