Kind of Hard to Follow

MickeyGreeen October 18, 2020 10:32 pm

The writing skill of this manhwa did not match the quality of the art imo. The pacing wasn't consistent, backstories were introduced without indication, and the story progression was hard to follow. I enjoyed it overall, but I think the storyboard could've been flushed out better before publishing.

Responses
    Torakaze October 19, 2020 1:07 am

    I understand. There is a few things they could had flushed out. Though some problems are from Tapas translations . The Korean story is MUCH better. Tapas they changed many things. The fan translations group is working on getting up all the their chapters up soon. It is a different story in ways. They have four up in the raws section.
    Yes I was the backstories need more indications but I guess they thought the tan backgrounds indicated it.

    MickeyGreeen October 19, 2020 3:23 am
    I understand. There is a few things they could had flushed out. Though some problems are from Tapas translations . The Korean story is MUCH better. Tapas they changed many things. The fan translations grou... Torakaze

    Thank you for letting me know. I'm self-studying Korean right now, so perhaps I'll try to translate the narrative myself now that I know the gist of the story. It'd be a good comprehension test of my Korean knowledge thus far!

    Mafuyu KetSUki November 1, 2020 9:38 am
    I understand. There is a few things they could had flushed out. Though some problems are from Tapas translations . The Korean story is MUCH better. Tapas they changed many things. The fan translations grou... Torakaze

    Whoa, who's this fan translation you talking about? And where can i read it?

    Torakaze November 2, 2020 2:34 pm
    Whoa, who's this fan translation you talking about? And where can i read it? Mafuyu KetSUki

    They only have 4 up. They are in the raw section. They are working in the others. They have many done but they are have not uploaded them. I think they are waiting to get it all done then upload them. I think they are waiting to see if there are extras or side stories as well.

    Torakaze November 2, 2020 2:38 pm
    Thank you for letting me know. I'm self-studying Korean right now, so perhaps I'll try to translate the narrative myself now that I know the gist of the story. It'd be a good comprehension test of my Korean kno... MickeyGreeen

    No problem. I just seen this. My bad. I don’t know Korean. My friend Mi Amore is self-stuffing korean as well. She used to get really upset when they changed a part. But the French and Japanese still close to the Korean. Why they English reimagined parts we don’t know.
    That would be a good test on your comprehension of your Korean. Mi Amore said she learned a lot translating. You can talk to her if you want to know more or compare things in Korean or the story.