Bad, incredibly bad

Meruemshu October 25, 2020 10:49 am

This story is so bad, so messy. Only the graphics are acceptable but nothing special.


The content is really...meh. Also, the main character is a fckin pedophile no matter how you put it so this story doesnt even make sense, there's a huge lack of universe development, no con text whatsoever....

It's not the worst I've read that's why im not putting 1 star.

Responses
    nickname October 25, 2020 11:51 am

    i mean.. the story is supposed to be comedy and it's like a parody so even readers here didn't expect much for the plot tho. at least some of us enjoyed it bcs we think it's funny. if you want a story with better plot why did you chose this in the first place?

    Just forget you ever saw me October 27, 2020 4:50 am

    I personally really like the stories, each story was really fun to read and was always something unexpected. Well thats just my opinion haha

    Meruemshu October 27, 2020 11:36 pm
    i mean.. the story is supposed to be comedy and it's like a parody so even readers here didn't expect much for the plot tho. at least some of us enjoyed it bcs we think it's funny. if you want a story with bett... nickname

    Do you want me to make you a list of funny stories that still have a good plot? Because I can.

    It's incredible the way some people have to excuse bad writing with "it's humor" like why fo you guys think mediocre is acceptable as long as there's comedy? That's disrespecting the genre more than anything.

    Also, asking me why I chose this is like me asking you why, as a cheese lover, you would try a new cheese

    SūtaHoshi October 31, 2020 12:00 pm

    Whose a pedo?

    Meruemshu November 1, 2020 1:05 am
    Whose a pedo? SūtaHoshi

    Long haired dude

    Doreamon chingu November 11, 2020 5:43 pm
    Do you want me to make you a list of funny stories that still have a good plot? Because I can.It's incredible the way some people have to excuse bad writing with "it's humor" like why fo you guys think mediocre... Meruemshu

    I don't know why u guys are arguing but I would like the list of comedy bl, would you please pass on some?

    Meruemshu November 11, 2020 11:36 pm
    I don't know why u guys are arguing but I would like the list of comedy bl, would you please pass on some? Doreamon chingu

    No problem:

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    Doreamon chingu November 12, 2020 12:20 pm
    No problem:Whose baby is itAkuma wa hohoemu The devil's temptationPrivate Scandal19 daysEscape JourneyNever UnderstandMother's spiritLove is an illusionWork, Fight and LoveBJ AlexTotally Captivated Meruemshu

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