Ok so there is a lack of focus on the current time and events, there aren't any reasons to care about them and the story lacks a goal
The story lack essence, it's pointless and I have no reason to care about the characters. They do things for the sake of doing them.
I am extremely disappointed since I started this with high hopes and high expectations as the author can beautifully paint a scene not just with their artistic abilities but also with words. They have a wells enveloped perception of reality but that's it.
This story lacks so much and it's just convoluted but in a way which lacks logic.
Am disappointed
I was expecting to find and unnoticed gem....
Developed*
I just started but in a way this feels oddly genius but at the same time I feel like there needs to be more.