i really hate how seme is so manipulative since the beginning. i'm always down for a smut ...

Oh you poor thing. The exit is that away. Thank you very much.

somehow this relationship feels like there is no love in it lmao, its just weird. not leaving because its fictional and i understand that, but my opinion is that this is borderline gaslighting at points, which makes it all feel uncomfy

You're rude, they're just expressing their opinion

You could stop reading but you come back every time...ha

"If you have nothing good to say, don't say anything at all."

Lol it’s true tho

It at best because of how he was in the beginning like yeah he was a bit weird but what makes you think he doesent love his bottom? Even if the bottom was timid, he still knew he loved him, didn’t he cry

it is true that he has forcefully pushed himself onto the uke, when he was drunk, and its just so glossed over like its nothing smh. and it just feels like they lack chemistry? "you're cute" is literally the only thing that they say to show affection and their relationship progressed so fast through such a short time. I haven't seen much interactions between them, apart from when they are banging, which means there is nothing to explain why the seme wanted to "be serious" and why the uke trusts him so much. Their love and relationship seems so forced. But of course, im staying for the smut (▰˘◡˘▰).

I feel like the author intended for them to like eachother like why wouldn’t they but mabie she just did a poor job of showing it?? And they showed more affection if you continue reading but yeah the top was a bit weird so I understand why people would think that way. Like a yandere

if you can't take criticism then don't read the comments lmao

i'm just waiting for character improvement honestly, it's not like i hate the plot.

I think the author thinks she did a good job like he’s kinda fine the way he is (in the authors viewpoint) so I doubt it . Like their both happy together so .. but who knows. He does have this almost yandere side some people are into and mabie that’s what the author is going for

She is doing a good job.... don’t be rude to the author when you can’t even pay for the real thing lolol

I didn’t mean to sound rude. I meant it in like she did a good job but she didn’t quite do what he wanted? But yeah I didn’t mean to sound rude It’s just when I’m talking to someone in the internet about an argument I always try to seem friendly or seem like I’m on their side so I switch things up a bit but I didn’t mean it like that. I like what the author did but I tried saying it like.. the author isn’t gonna do what he wants?? If that makes sense

She did a good job and to me I love what she did but I’m trying to sound more mutual to this person so I kinda switch up what I think?? If that makes sense but I personally love what she did and I have no problem with it, I didn’t realize how bad it sounded