The whole plot is a mess but im still going to read it bcuz now im curious abt the snake god but it still doesnt change the fact that the plot is so baddd the pacing is too fast, theres more dialogue than actual explanation (narration) going on and it's so hard to keep up! It's like trying to go against the flow of a strong water current
The whole plot is a mess but im still going to read it bcuz now im curious abt the snake god but it still doesnt change the fact that the plot is so baddd the pacing is too fast, theres more dialogue than actual explanation (narration) going on and it's so hard to keep up! It's like trying to go against the flow of a strong water current