It was a really nice story just until they started dating! I mean why didn’t they expand the story about how the guy was meeting his tutor although he has had kissed juhyon!johyon just let go of it, what if they actually wanted to get back(the gay guy with his totur) you know everything was ready for a bug drama but it was like they just weren’t in the mood to make sense of tge scene that they added into the manhwa, like where’s the drama you made us expect in that scene ???.-. and about his birthday,why didn’t he wish juhyon a happy birthday Sooner?maybe at 12? Why?just why? Ok it may not have been his style and was waiting to just do that when he sees him in the morning but even tgen he didn’t say a word about it, so i was expecting to see tgat whether stg big has had happened or he was at least planning a surprise or sth, but then again it wasn’t anything of the sort:/ but just letting it go like that without making excuses and saying sth like I’m your present and all, when his birthDAY has nearly ended, sounds like a shabby excuse:/it was like he just remembered before the day has ended And wanted to just do sth so juhyon would forget, they neither talk about these details that WOULD lead into misunderstandings nor seem like care about it, it was so good until before they started dating, it felt as if the author was bored with the story and wanted to end it soon after.-. My criticisms don’t mean i hate it or anything it’s just tgat i thought the plot and story and even tge author has more potential, and could become a better story, i was kinda disappointed TBH,still good job to be fair i did enjoy it till sone points as I’ve said before, and i liked the other work of this author that’s why I’ve had decided to read another work of the author again which was tgis.
Omg you just ranted what I wanted to say! I agree there are a lot of plot holes and the story felt so rushed that I was really not as invested to the couple than I previously thought. This is not a bad story per se, but it could have been better.
Omg you just ranted what I wanted to say! I agree there are a lot of plot holes and the story felt so rushed that I was really not as invested to the couple than I previously thought. This is not a bad story pe... personak8
It was a really nice story just until they started dating!
I mean why didn’t they expand the story about how the guy was meeting his tutor although he has had kissed juhyon!johyon just let go of it, what if they actually wanted to get back(the gay guy with his totur) you know everything was ready for a bug drama but it was like they just weren’t in the mood to make sense of tge scene that they added into the manhwa, like where’s the drama you made us expect in that scene ???.-. and about his birthday,why didn’t he wish juhyon a happy birthday Sooner?maybe at 12? Why?just why? Ok it may not have been his style and was waiting to just do that when he sees him in the morning but even tgen he didn’t say a word about it, so i was expecting to see tgat whether stg big has had happened or he was at least planning a surprise or sth, but then again it wasn’t anything of the sort:/ but just letting it go like that without making excuses and saying sth like I’m your present and all, when his birthDAY has nearly ended, sounds like a shabby excuse:/it was like he just remembered before the day has ended And wanted to just do sth so juhyon would forget, they neither talk about these details that WOULD lead into misunderstandings nor seem like care about it, it was so good until before they started dating, it felt as if the author was bored with the story and wanted to end it soon after.-. My criticisms don’t mean i hate it or anything it’s just tgat i thought the plot and story and even tge author has more potential, and could become a better story, i was kinda disappointed TBH,still good job to be fair i did enjoy it till sone points as I’ve said before, and i liked the other work of this author that’s why I’ve had decided to read another work of the author again which was tgis.