Woah sounds like you're getting unnecessarily worked up there. Maybe you should drop this because it clearly isn't your cup of tea.
Still, on your point about the sister - I agree that she's making a bad situation worse. Honestly I'm not even sure if she's being malicious or if she's just that dumb.
(Also, not to be rude but you should really consider using periods or paragraph breaks because it's really hard to read such a huge chunk of text)
Maybe I did get a little bit too worked up I know that I did write that at like 4-6 in the morning don’t really remember and I hadn’t slept a wink so I might’ve been mad that I couldn’t fall asleep
Oh and on that note about the paragraph’s and periods
I probably wouldn’t put them correctly anyways as I usually text to speech because I am heavily dyslexic when it comes to writing I also Ranted so I didn’t care much about that but thank you I think I should use breaks more often though I think that would take too long but I feel like they would be very abrupt well they would be random
But I’m just I think It because I’m looking for a good either reincarnation or sent to another world story’s and I can’t find a good one because it’s been a very long time since I read any
I hope I made it shorter properly
It’s kind of trash I thought it would’ve been better it was going a really good way at the start but no trash and it even had a time to redeem itself and it’s still not the best first of all I hate the girl like I fucking hate her so bad she knows for a fact that he’s going to get beaten up and he’s getting in trouble if she keeps going near him I know that she’s trying to make him feel better but at least she could be more tactful about it in a way that she wouldn’t get fucking caught number two what’s up with the dad like I’m not even kidding was he like nice and then me not to fucking know where is he relieving some trauma that he had like that his dad regret making him the successor and now he’s just pissed off so he’s like oh he has low power he needs to be smacked around but that’s which is way too quick I get a rise angry but at first just being detached and kind of even disgusted glaring a little bit like push you away and being like ill and then when he finally said something snapping that would’ve made a lot more sense like a slow drag out and not just stuff let’s do a bunch of sporadic bullshit that makes no absolute fucking sense even in story mode because that’s what we’re trying to tell fantasy or not oh unless probably make the FL his cousin no and make her so pathetic and make the MC not be able to use any of his clearly advance knowledge that he has from his world and mostly comics and no sort of way because they’re not useful and he won’t even try them like I don’t get that shit