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And incase this continues and the author chooses to let khaol and river end up together, I swear I won't forgive the author for hurting and using heil, fuck kaveri and khaol idc what happens to them, all I want is for river and heil to be happy at least.
The story was set off really nice and interesting in the beginning but bruh in the middle everything crumpled and the plot became shit, idc if this continues or not because it's already super destroyed. Idk why the title and the story doesn't match but still they used it, the ship that should be sailing didn't sail but instead when the moment where heil should have been let go by river didn't happen but instead the author wanted to shittyly include kaveri, I swear this is one of the most "could be potential enough to attract lots of attention but failed because the plot became shit" thingy
I know river is happy now but khaol also I bet had developed feelings for river but I am so frustrated, the author God knows why he even add 'jealousy' scenario if the author didn't want them to end together, he chose the "betray" thing just because he wants to make the story interesting but failed ugh, I am having so much trouble having proper sleep after reading this, it's neither sad, nor interesting anymore, it's just p a t h e t i c. Agree or not it's not gonna change. Although I am happy River let Khoal go based on this shitty betrayal, river doesn't deserve khaol.