
well its a flashback so she cant learn to be a better master if she wasnt one to begin with and also no offense but wk is the last person she should be learning dom ettiquette from cause he's a certified dbag in that regard. but he's hot so ill let it go lol. (and he's nice 2 doona and his other female partner seemed pleased with him so idk maybe he's just mean 2 men lol)

I’m not talking about the relationship at all between the main character and the guy. I agree, she shouldn’t learn from him at all. When I said “they”, I meant the author. And when I was talking about the feeling of the story, I mean the whole aura. It’s not chaotic as the earlier chapters felt. Right now,’it feels smooth and gives a feeling that isn’t dread or disgust that I personally was feeling earlier. The guy is a selfish manipulative jerk but at this time, we wouldn’t know that if the story started here.
Overall, I was talking about the aura of the story and would have rather had this since the beginning instead of this just being a flashback.

well i dont disagree with that sentiment. i also prefer these scenes to the darker ones and yeah the story was more chaotic in the beginning because its much older, author style changes over time. except for how messy doona/minho is. its like...exhausting how their dynamic hasnt changed at all but she's writing smut not high literature so *shrugs* as long as its nice to look at.
I know I’ve said this before but this is actually the best this story has been. If only they started here and just kept going this way it would have been much better without all the other stuff going on earlier in the story. Now, it seems she was trying to figure out her interests and discovering other aspects of it. This could have been the start of her learning to be a better mistress in the lifestyle