Anyone else thought this chapter was really choppy? Like it just cut from her trying to st...

kelly202 November 20, 2020 3:26 pm

Anyone else thought this chapter was really choppy? Like it just cut from her trying to stab the dog then to begging the dad to save her and then the two guys jumping up to save her. Like the artists didn't draw anything to make it look flowing ( ̄へ ̄)

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    Queen November 20, 2020 4:13 pm

    Ikr it was like...

    *boom* knife in her hands
    *boom* the wolf slapped it off
    *woosh woosh woosh* the knife goes to the floor
    *boom* "I can't do it" so ask papa for help
    *boom* "ask me not him"

    lnaii November 20, 2020 4:42 pm
    Ikr it was like...*boom* knife in her hands *boom* the wolf slapped it off *woosh woosh woosh* the knife goes to the floor*boom* "I can't do it" so ask papa for help*boom* "ask me not him" Queen

    right!! and the slap looked so elegant too

    Queen November 20, 2020 5:01 pm
    right!! and the slap looked so elegant too lnaii

    Lol yes ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    tomka November 20, 2020 6:32 pm

    right? it's going in a weird direction and I was cringing so hard the entire chapter lol it just didn't hit the mark

    Yona November 20, 2020 7:10 pm
    Ikr it was like...*boom* knife in her hands *boom* the wolf slapped it off *woosh woosh woosh* the knife goes to the floor*boom* "I can't do it" so ask papa for help*boom* "ask me not him" Queen

    Yes! Yes!

    Just Some Bunny Eating Flowers November 21, 2020 2:31 am
    right!! and the slap looked so elegant too lnaii

    She just went "welp, I tried. Time for plan 2" after wolf just yeeted her knife away

    lnaii November 21, 2020 9:12 am
    She just went "welp, I tried. Time for plan 2" after wolf just yeeted her knife away Just Some Bunny Eating Flowers

    she seems pretty week.. like even if she's young. lil sis got a knife shoved outa her hand (in the most elegant way) by a wolf. let's hope her character development becomes better(*゚▽゚)ノ