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You're right, its my opinion. I like the story but the art is weird. I'm sorry that I thought I could mention it in the comments but that's my problem. Please don't go around doing this because its actually quite rude, people are allowed to read whatever they want even if they complain about it the whole way. I respect your opinion, but take it elsewhere. Besides, I read the whole thing days ago so you're a bit late with that anyway.
The art is nice, but some of the guys faces and especially the profiles... its questionable. I keep wondering what's wrong with everyone's neck, why do the necks look larger than their heads.