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Well firstly sorry but i had to say it, secondly it has to do with the grammar and i'm not judging at all it has nothing to do with that. Thirdly if i wasn't right then there would be 0 likes on this comment so please keep an open mind. Also i love this story and as i said i'm really grateful but i had to point it out so no need for arguments here it's just my opinion.
I'm really grateful that it's uploaded and i love it but honestly there are few mistakes here and there... umm it's understandable so no biggie. I'm sorry, i had to say it.