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This story has been jumpy and abrupt in general. Its the authors first story so they are still finding their rhythm. Lots of potential though. Cant wait to read their next story
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This story has been jumpy and abrupt in general. Its the authors first story so they are still finding their rhythm. Lots of potential though. Cant wait to read their next story
I'm not gonna lie, I'm expecting Simon's family to show up and flaunt their dominance against Will's father, ruining him for messing with their baby-
Unfortunately, i heard that the ending was abrupt and rushed