Okay I’m just gonna criticize(not bash) the translation. It’s really bad, like it look...

whatintheBL November 23, 2020 12:53 pm

Okay I’m just gonna criticize(not bash) the translation. It’s really bad, like it looks like you put the text in google translate and immediately just used that translation, making it obvious that the person who’s translating doesn’t speak fluent English.
If somehow, the translator/scanlator sees this, I’d recommend that they get a fluent English speaker to just go over the translations to make sure it’s grammatically correct and is actually pertaining to the way speech is meant to be spoken in this time period and the world. For example, one of the translation was literally “Bro, mom is not fine”. While it did make me giggle, it shows that it ruined the atmosphere of that scene. You could’ve just put “Brother Conrad, our mother is unwell/sick” This pertains more to the speech used at this time period, and shows the severity of the situation.
There’s many people im sure who r willing to help, even I am, if need be.
I’m still grateful for all the work you’ve put in. The cleaning and redrawn was very well done. Thank you!

Responses
    Eva November 23, 2020 12:55 pm

    Couldn't have said it better

    Kezza_GK November 23, 2020 1:11 pm

    If the translator does read this I volunteer to proofread (▰˘◡˘▰)

    dr43 November 23, 2020 1:19 pm

    Thank you for saying this. I wanted to comment about the bad translation but I don't wanna get attack for being ungrateful. I'm really grateful that there's a translation but I'm having a trouble understanding the chapters.