In one of the first chapters, that guy friend of the uke tries to pin him, but is interrup...

Darwinist July 8, 2015 2:26 am

In one of the first chapters, that guy friend of the uke tries to pin him, but is interrupted by the seme and is allowed to watch the uke and seme. I wanted him to come to their next meeting too and watch again. I wanted that to happen a few times before either switching places with one of them or just join in... Then later I'd want one to get tossed aside... The author could have some fun going back and forth with plenty of heartbreak, desperate longing and passionate love...

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    Mameiha July 8, 2015 6:36 am

    I like where your mind goes. Do you write?

    Darwinist July 8, 2015 5:51 pm
    I like where your mind goes. Do you write? Mameiha

    I'm afraid I don't write, that is because when I try to write a story I get overwhelmed by the possibilities of the story, for example what sort of world should they live in? should it be a strange land where dragons are made out of fabric? or seeming normal place but twisted characters? and those are just the basic facts of the universe the characters live in... I can't write because i get lost in the facts and lose the story. But it is different when I read a story where the world is already constructed and I can see how they interact... and then I can see where the story should go... or at least what I would find most exciting. But thank you for the compliment, it made me happy.

    Mameiha July 8, 2015 6:52 pm

    Try starting with fan fiction. The world and character details are already set in canon, you can manipulate them from there. I think you would not only be good at it, but I think you would also find writing your own stories easier later. You might just enjoy the hell out of it too. If you ever need a proof reader I'd be happy to help. I'll look forward to reading your work. (⌒▽⌒)

    tokidoki July 8, 2015 7:34 pm
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    LOL - saw your comment on the main page - is that why you crossed the road?

    tokidoki July 8, 2015 7:56 pm
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    Oh ho ... so you admit other things came first? Like the egg? (visions eggs spurting is kind of weird)
    What were the other reasons?

    tokidoki July 8, 2015 8:23 pm
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    Well, that sounds reasonable, I would do the same if I was allowed to (I am not allowed to cross the road without someone holding my hand - jk)
    And if some lovely martinis were being served ... well then I think we should all participate.
    As for the rest, if Asami or Kuon or even Touya were on the other side, I would definitely break the rules and cross.

    tokidoki July 8, 2015 9:12 pm
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    Yeah! But I would prefer something else to eat - like...umm, chocolate covered strawberries, or sugar curried almonds. (I have a sweet tooth)
    However if an Asami look-alike is serving ... well I guess I would eat whatever he serves - muahahaha

    Darwinist July 10, 2015 1:07 am
    Try starting with fan fiction. The world and character details are already set in canon, you can manipulate them from there. I think you would not only be good at it, but I think you would also find writing you... Mameiha

    ... This has really turned into quite the conversation... and Mameiha, I think that was actually a really good suggestion, maybe I should give it a go... Thank you, and if I do write something, I will be sure to send it your way.

    Coco July 12, 2015 2:20 am
    ... This has really turned into quite the conversation... and Mameiha, I think that was actually a really good suggestion, maybe I should give it a go... Thank you, and if I do write something, I will be sure t... Darwinist

    This is such a lovely conversation to stumble upon, I usually avoid comments like plague because of the spoilers but couldn't decide whether to read the manga or not. Writing fanfiction personally gave me writers' block, hope you have better luck. Ciao !