When the story started I thought it would be good....but it kinda got boring because the F...

Crynn November 27, 2020 5:16 pm

When the story started I thought it would be good....but it kinda got boring because the FL's weak ...like she doesn't stand up or fight for herself....honestly I would like it if the FL was like an assassin to kill the Sultan.. like it would make the plot so interesting. We know where this story will go....People will try to kill the FL and the ML is going to save her as always..

Responses
    Alex November 27, 2020 9:11 pm

    definitely.. i appreciate the art & all but the story itself is lacking at the moment simply bc the FL is weak .. but ima keep reading and see if there’s character development

    Andrew November 27, 2020 9:41 pm

    Same and the ml is realy obsessive and psychotic,like I live for obbsesive ml but killing a child?Chile anyways,also I feel like at least one of his brothers were under the age of 10 so He cant be trusted

    1800GAYTOPS November 27, 2020 11:45 pm

    Bruh I literally fell asleep a couple times and had to start over like 2-3 times.