there is a big jump from chapter 4 to chapter 5 in terms of character interaction, development and consistency. where is the process confrontation, acceptation, struggle and liberation suddenly gone? ch5 just threw those out the window and felt rushed af.
in ch4 it felt like yukito realized smth about himself when the driver said "he is a human being", he even told his father "it's okay, i won't do things that make you sad anymore", leading us to believe he has a plan of some sort, which got messed up bc of his father tailing him through gps trackers. then all of the sudden none of that matters, we jump to the driver's past trauma, which was never hinted at nor does it matter in the grand scheme of things, because he overcomes it in a second as soon as yukito embraces him. and then they find out yukito's father died, which doesn't seem to matter, either, bc we jump 3 years into the future where they live together and yukito's whoring himself out to publishing personalities doesn't seem to matter anymore, too. unless yukito's "plan"(?) was to kill his dad and he succeeded, i don't see how anything in ch5 makes sense in relation to the previous 4 chapters.
Yeah, pretty sure the author had to wrap it up for whatever reason. A real shame. When I started reading this I thought this has potential to be a real gem.
there is a big jump from chapter 4 to chapter 5 in terms of character interaction, development and consistency. where is the process confrontation, acceptation, struggle and liberation suddenly gone? ch5 just threw those out the window and felt rushed af.
in ch4 it felt like yukito realized smth about himself when the driver said "he is a human being", he even told his father "it's okay, i won't do things that make you sad anymore", leading us to believe he has a plan of some sort, which got messed up bc of his father tailing him through gps trackers. then all of the sudden none of that matters, we jump to the driver's past trauma, which was never hinted at nor does it matter in the grand scheme of things, because he overcomes it in a second as soon as yukito embraces him. and then they find out yukito's father died, which doesn't seem to matter, either, bc we jump 3 years into the future where they live together and yukito's whoring himself out to publishing personalities doesn't seem to matter anymore, too.
unless yukito's "plan"(?) was to kill his dad and he succeeded, i don't see how anything in ch5 makes sense in relation to the previous 4 chapters.