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Well for the aspect of develop the character, i agree on you. There some of missing about the story for develop the character
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Well for the aspect of develop the character, i agree on you. There some of missing about the story for develop the character
Wow I was so excited for this manhwa because it was tagged as seke, but then it turned out so fricking bad that I had to drop it halfway.... Everything was just so unrealistic and fast paced, there were no room for the relationships to progress and develop properly. Examples of these would be Jordyn easily entering a relationship with Simon despite them knowing each other for only a few days, Simon getting mad out of the blue or for something that was barely noticeable as a problem, and how Owen developed feelings for Jordyn without being shown obvious reasons as to why he developed such.
Not only that, the whole thing became so over the place when Simon finally developed feelings for Owen?? God fucking dammit, what was all the infidelity for? and the shitty excuse Owen gave with hurting the people he wanted to be close to, pertaining to having sex with Jordyn's partner as the ONLY solution to break them up. Really? Plus, he technically r4ped Jordyn, fuck that shit.
I don't even rate stories as low as 1-star, but the whole thing was just so stupid and over the place I couldn't help myself. There goes the 4 hours I wasted reading this.