I didn't like either stories.

@MyiPodisCute August 7, 2015 3:41 am

Both of the semes manipulated the ukes in some way. In the first story the seme said he needed to hold himself back, but from WHAT?! He wasn't even going anywhere, it's not like he was "saving their relationship" all he did was act like a douche at work and home. And then indirectly shut him down, then right after he just suddenly decides let's just do it right now, what even? Then the second seme was playing around (okay he wasn't having sex but he knew that's what the uke was thinking so he might as well have). Then he went and stole his potential love interest but was easily forgiven because he wasn't actually having sex wit all the girls he flirting with..And he said he loves you. That makes everything okay in yaoi apparently. Plus his excuse was he was keeping all of them away from the uke, but none of them even cared who he was, so that made abso-fucking-lutely no sense whatsoever. All in, they're delusional. And even the girl led him on, seeing as how she already had a boyfriend.. (╯°Д °)╯╧╧

Responses
    Shellie August 9, 2015 4:39 am

    Exactly! Makes me want to throw something, grr. The end particular irritate me, when the uke called the seem "kind"....based on what???

    nem September 18, 2015 1:15 pm

    The second story reminds me of thise story made by ootsuki miu where the seme uses this shinny lip gloss as a lube lol
    the seme literally took all the girls that had an eye on the uke not only that he fuck ukes gf too
    amazing ( ̄∇ ̄")

    Anonymous September 19, 2015 3:22 am
    The second story reminds me of thise story made by ootsuki miu where the seme uses this shinny lip gloss as a lube lolthe seme literally took all the girls that had an eye on the uke not only that he fuck ukes ... @nem

    Can you tell me its name, please?
    Thank you!

    nicadareas September 19, 2015 3:52 am

    I agree 100%. I didn't care for any of the semes. Even in the third chapter, the seme came across as a bit of a jerk. Basically, I got this "ye okay as you are, but I can make you so much better" vibe. That was a total turn off for me. I would rather someone love me for the person I am than who they believe I can be. No matter what the seme said at the end, it just didn't come across as sincere when the whole story involved makeovers and an affirmation that the seme would continue trying to change him.

    nicadareas September 19, 2015 3:53 am

    you're* not ye sorry