I am very confused. No offense to the author- making a story is hard and the drawing is p...

Hopeless_shipper December 23, 2020 6:34 pm

I am very confused.

No offense to the author- making a story is hard and the drawing is pretty cute- but this story is a mess.

The plot is all over the place and it looks like they're trying very hard for comedy with an OP main character who is also incredibly dumb. And sorry to inform you, but the only one I know who can successfully pull that off is saitama.

The pace is skewed, the plot is nowhere in sight, and the characters are unlikable. I think I'm just staying because of a mixture of nice art, curiosity, and boredom.

I mean, the father is a piece of shit(I'm not just gonna ignore the first few chapters, ok? I know you guys have a thing for asshole daddy's but this is crossing the line for me), The mc is, to put it frankly, and idiot- no one seems to have common sense and i keep getting confused about her gender.

How does that even work. If you don't have neither female nor male genitals, how do you go to the bathroom??? And if everyone thinks he's a guy, why are they into him?? Are they gay? And the guys romantic interest just seems out of nowhere- he was perfectly amicable until just now where he's suddenly obsessed like the heck??? Where the hell did you even pull that crap from???



And i know that I'm going to get a lot of dislikes or whatever but I just had to say it

Responses
    Ferrid December 23, 2020 6:46 pm

    I eat shit like this up ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ i just ignore plot and enjoy the fluff. And when a story with actual plot shows up, i gorge

    Tsura Sobasa December 23, 2020 7:06 pm
    I eat shit like this up ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ i just ignore plot and enjoy the fluff. And when a story with actual plot shows up, i gorge Ferrid

    Know the feeling ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Wingapo December 23, 2020 7:12 pm

    Can I give an AMEN?!(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ
    I agree with you 150%
    The story is a mess plus her gender is weird concept. I mean in Elqueeness he clearly says he is a man to Everybody! even if he is genderless and confiuesed to be a girl, but here this issue is just a big mess. XD (=・ω・=)

    MxChi_dumdum December 23, 2020 7:16 pm
    I eat shit like this up ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭ i just ignore plot and enjoy the fluff. And when a story with actual plot shows up, i gorge Ferrid

    Facts plus the dads hot(づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

    PARROT December 23, 2020 7:32 pm

    Exactly, it was so off putting when he kissed her. He never even shown any romantic interest in her before. And then he yelled at her earlier because the other lady was a noble? If he really cared he would’ve said something to the lady without care. It feels really rushed and makes him seem a little bipolar to me.

    Cell_Hacker December 23, 2020 7:45 pm

    Dude I totally agree with you there a some places when the story lags and some where you just like "the fuck just happened? Did I miss something?" I feel like the story is trying to hard to be something that it can never be like the MC is really annoying like why don't you try and ACTUALLY GET STRONG WITHOUT ANYONES HELP! she's a Mary sue at this moment and it's kinda lackluster, this story is average I'm my opinion

    Blue December 23, 2020 7:58 pm

    I agree with you. It is all over the place I wish they’d just pick one scenario and stick with it, they’re trying to make it too many things at the same time and it just doesn’t make sense anymore

    Ferrid December 23, 2020 8:25 pm
    Dude I totally agree with you there a some places when the story lags and some where you just like "the fuck just happened? Did I miss something?" I feel like the story is trying to hard to be something that it... Cell_Hacker

    I always feel like there are pages missing ( ̄∇ ̄")

    Dai December 23, 2020 8:27 pm
    Exactly, it was so off putting when he kissed her. He never even shown any romantic interest in her before. And then he yelled at her earlier because the other lady was a noble? If he really cared he would’ve... PARROT

    SPOILER

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    . Apparently, the dudes a mf psycho who planned everything from the beginning to keep Haein for himself,, so that's that

    Tsura Sobasa December 23, 2020 8:52 pm
    SPOILER. . . . Apparently, the dudes a mf psycho who planned everything from the beginning to keep Haein for himself,, so that's that Dai

    Noooo!!! (╯°Д °)╯╧╧ I had a feeling when he kissed her out of nowhere but I still hoped...! (/TДT)/

    Ferrid December 23, 2020 8:56 pm
    SPOILER. . . . Apparently, the dudes a mf psycho who planned everything from the beginning to keep Haein for himself,, so that's that Dai

    ....planned what? How far does his plan go? Does he even like her?

    Hopeless_shipper December 23, 2020 10:32 pm
    SPOILER. . . . Apparently, the dudes a mf psycho who planned everything from the beginning to keep Haein for himself,, so that's that Dai

    Lmao what. Does he even know she's not a guy???

    Or is he aware of her heritage?
    It makes absolutely no ducking sense, and it adds another reason to my bullet point of why this story is just wrong