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hahah you're right though, i was a bit confuse with how fast-paced the story is even though they have little to no interaction, romance-wise, at all!!!
Yeah it's almost like we needed on or two chapters of just romantic development for those two and we would be good to go.
maybe this side of the story is for minjoom we havent seen daiki side tho and i was re reading it i can see daiki's face and he stares ay minjoon soooo we dont know yet
hmm The flow seems rather fast? No, I think their development seems lacking or forced? It appears that seme loves his wife, but how can he just fall in love with uke when their interaction is lacking and we know, how seme is kind of cold towards uke then suddenly boom? Oh but it's not like I'm saying its bad, it actually have potential if the author keeps the flow smoother, like they should have more interaction between them, Seme is like waking up then go to work and sleep, cycle repeats. Beatch!? how can ya fall in love? when in the first place their interaction and development is lacking? It would be hot if seme finds something unique about him, as he learned to know him and falling in love with him little by little. Not with, forcing to drop a bomb suddenly without any warning or so. Well its just my opinion, its good and it has potential but the flow is rather messy. (づ￣ ³￣)づ