Rush rush , lacking of something , I m desapointed because it has potential

Saphir December 27, 2020 9:01 pm

Rush rush , lacking of something , I m desapointed because it has potential

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    Coolicefun December 27, 2020 10:31 pm

    That’s the point.... lots of yaois are short for lots of reasons due to the authors choice, so I wouldn’t really consider that into your “whether it was good or not”, the whole point is it’s supposed to be short and sweet

    akihiko December 27, 2020 11:45 pm

    i agree like it was super cute, super nice art style the characters are cute but it felt a little rushed so unfortunately i didn’t get too attached to the characters. plus i’ve read other short story yaoi like this one that are really good and filling but this was is just kinda eh something is missing

    Coolicefun December 28, 2020 1:23 am
    i agree like it was super cute, super nice art style the characters are cute but it felt a little rushed so unfortunately i didn’t get too attached to the characters. plus i’ve read other short story yaoi l... akihiko

    I feel with all these yaois stories that are short and sweet they could definitely be longer with added character development, more plot, issues, emotions, etc but for some reason either the author doesn’t have the time, the skill they think they need, the team, or whatever else so they just want to make somthing like this. There’s lots like this I wish were longer but (〜 ̄△ ̄)〜 what can ya do

    akihiko December 28, 2020 3:03 pm
    I feel with all these yaois stories that are short and sweet they could definitely be longer with added character development, more plot, issues, emotions, etc but for some reason either the author doesn’t ha... Coolicefun

    YES I AGREE W THIS !