Critical POV

Claude December 29, 2020 12:49 am

Comparing this to sensei's other works, this was a bit of a let down since sensei's previous works had characters with pretty defined emotions and personalities. However, the MC's in here didn't really flesh out their personalities imo. Seme seemed pretty much emotionless for me all throughout (like "wtf is in his head" kind of feeling). On the other hand, uke seemed like he also didn't know what the seme was really thinking and brushed a lot of things under the rug. Like, is it really that easy to get over the fact that your bf slept with other people when he was frustrated with your relationship? Granted they weren't an item then, but it seemed like a horrible way to realize one's feelings. ┑( ̄Д  ̄)┍

Anyway, art and smut -wise, sensei is still SUPERB!!!

Responses
    QutiePie101 January 2, 2021 6:00 pm

    They weren’t together so he couldn’t be upset about that! Not to mention he was the one that wasn’t interested in the beginning & tried to get rid of the seme, so all in all the uke had no real right to be upset when he didn’t want a relationship.

    Himemeow January 6, 2021 1:14 pm

    I agree with the seme part, but if the uke isn't bothered (since he was the one who told him to go experiment anyway, and they weren't even an item yet) I didn't really have much thought of it ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

    Kuurosan January 7, 2021 8:13 am
    They weren’t together so he couldn’t be upset about that! Not to mention he was the one that wasn’t interested in the beginning & tried to get rid of the seme, so all in all the uke had no real right ... QutiePie101

    ur exactly right