The art is good, but I think the author has to grow when it comes about the plot It lacks....

KBchan September 18, 2015 12:32 pm

The art is good, but I think the author has to grow when it comes about the plot
It lacks... Deepness I guess...

Responses
    Anonymous September 18, 2015 12:46 pm

    Yep!! Totally what I thought!

    Kin September 18, 2015 2:38 pm

    Yeah, depth and build-up.