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I think what the author wants to portray is a funny girl but when she starts to kick ass, we get shocked as readers. She wants the character to seem what she is not...does that make sense?
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I think what the author wants to portray is a funny girl but when she starts to kick ass, we get shocked as readers. She wants the character to seem what she is not...does that make sense?
not bc of strength shit and whatnot but, if the author wants her obsession with dresses the only side she has that indicates her as a girl... then her character build up is very weak. she's smart but why did they make her so childish for a 17 y/o? girls are mentally mature c'mon (￣∇￣")
i'm actually disappointed with how the start was angsty i was seriously hooked then it turned comical where i'm just reading but i feel like my ears are hurting from all her shouting.
it's a good read for passing time or if u want to clean ur mind after reading some dark shit. i really hope the story will progress with more growth on her