Responses
Wattpad story.....just a teeny reeny tad
Pfffft I didn't want to say but yes, the level is at whatpadd.
The story itself is fine, execution is not.
Don't get me wrong, I don't expect the epitome of writing in a BL
But if you're doing a visual story, use visual instruments to tell your story at least, instead of little exposition rectangles cause drawing hard.
This reminds me of the red hood manhua... It feels like reading a fanfic, too many exposition using words instead of using dialogue and panels..
Cool story tho