Oop

I’m thankful someone is updating this but I (and probably everyone else here....) really cannot understand the translations... I feel bad to criticize but its really impossible to effectively read the story when the words simply do not make sense at all maybe someone with good English can over and proofread or something to make the sentences make sense? Though I’m unsure how this process works especially cuz in some instances I don’t even know what the characters are trying to say