The fact that ML knows MC since he was in elementary is CRAZY. And it really threw me off bc I was liking this so far.
Idk its just so weird to me, I would never fall for anyone I know as a child while being a teenager myself.
The drama in itself messy, but I think it's funny that MC couldn't get hard after ML ghosted him. (Ass was too good ig)
I will let it cook for a while, but now I have a very bittersweet opinion on this.
Exactlyyyyy it threw me off so bad like there was no need for them to know each other as kids for the plot that was easily avoidable imo now it’s just weird to think about :((((
Yes, teehee freaky time yaay.
But they're been getting freaky so much, I want story!!
That bottom was over breed at the yaoi factory. Bro is not even white he is translucent with magenta.
The top was...eh.
Overall, tiktok needs to stop hyping mid.
But drunk sex when only one person is sober is just not it. Especially when MC is telling ML to stop and their response is "well you like me so..."
Not only that but ML could of been honest the moment he stepped inside the house?? This is already a short story anyways.
The plot with ML was slightly predictable ngl.
Ig I liked the trope and MC, but gawd damn ML got annoying in a matter of pages. You broke MCs heart and now you want get all jealous and clingy? Fuck off.
And the excessive fucking is just...excessive.
Everyone knows vampires don't get too excited and then try to drain you ＼(^_^)／
Almost knocked me out through the screen
(⌒▽⌒) me to I had to walk away