Writer decided no straight ships in this novel lol.
What especially irritating about the ml (there are many stuff to be honest) is the fact that this dude just straight up refuses to acknowledge his own romantic feelings for the mc, it's always this stupid " I want her because she is smart and useful".
The climax resolved so fast that it was anticlimactic and the ending of the villains felt boring even though I did like the plot points. This is why pacing is important in writing.
The pacing is all over the place, some actions make no sense and world building is also kinda poor. Elena egged her brother on against her sister and didn't see it to the end ? Especially when it was a rehearsal for the opera and she is the main singer, and she basically hates her sister / mc so watching mc being hounded would have made more sense. Another thing is that usually opera has multiple singers who play different characters but we didn't see that either.
The villains are such idiots to kill off their golden egg laying goose.
As long as the revenge is satisfying the rest can be glossed over after all people can't expect fast food to be gourmet meals and fast food can be fun from time to time.
I wish Kana would rejoin B-komachi, they desperately need a main vocal anyway.
Lol everyone in this webtoon is a dumbass but then again no need to expect logic in smut.
Is eve about to be exposed as an esper after saving the people from the bank robbery ? And is he going to get corrupted because of using his powers which will force Adam to do emergency guiding ? Guess we will find out next episode.
This reads like an amateur fanfic in webtoon form lol.
Lol ML was always the type to jump to conclusions, lucky for him MC is a pretty easy-going chill guy. If you think about it, they are both decently compatible.
Hello, I want a revenge story where the MC who is either smart or op (preferably smart because I like those more) gets revenge and all the evil doer get justice served. Or I wanna read a story where the red flag asshole is trashed to no end by the MC or circumstances and MC himself / herself gets together with the green flag or alone. Thanks for the help.
It's funny how the water goddess has a air related name (=・ω・=)
Just waiting for the empress to get justified end. You might as well consider her the 3rd villain of this story.
Backstory was supposed to make us root for the ML but honestly I kinda root for his friends he was forced to killed rather then him. What he went through was of course incredibly traumatic, no questions there and FL father is definitely a horrible guy but to project all his guilt, devastation, hatred and even love on to the FL because she broke this idolised mold he created of her (as others have already pointed out, along with their twisted parasocial relationship) and to continue to feel the same way even now honestly feels a bit childish. To feel that way back then when he had nothing might have made sense but to do so now just makes it feel like the dude never really matured and never realised that FL is a living breathing human being capable of change (something FL already pointed out after her first suicide). FL even in her depressed state feels more mature than him, she actually understood why the change happened and was necessary despite what it cost her, I just feel bad this story makes her carry the burden of the crimes committed by her forefathers that she was completely ignorant of and makes ignorance itself such a huge crime which makes no sense. For example how the FL apologised to Katherine right after SHE was shot and lost her only child and somehow the story projects that as the just thing??? Like completely get apologising for her ignorance but to do so right after SHE was hurt to the sister of her perpetrator seems to almost minimise any crime against her, like she almost deserves all the horrible things that happen to her simple because of her ignorance.
Spoilers ahead
The writer of this story has clearly decided to make ignorance the greatest possible flaw a person could have and has decided to "punish" the FL for it to a disproportionate level (based on the spoilers FL definitely doesn't catch a break even after all this to the point she loses the proper functioning of her hands). I think I understand where she might come from because I am sure we all have read a lot of stories where MC benefits in ignorance while her family/ spouse keeps commiting horrible crimes and their ignorance never even pointed out but story goes the completely opposite direction and honesty I just pity the FL for being part of a story like this lol.
Piss ain't that bad, it's 99% percent water anyway
Also I wonder if MC will go around collecting all the ML's units guys as pokemon to help them calm down and find some peace after all they have been through and also to recruit them to his side & reveal the secret behind their creation to everyone who can turn on the second Prince who is trying to kill ML.