
this was good. like considering the overall elements: plot, premise, art, and development, this is quite the BL story.
however i just wanna point out that this is 75% misunderstanding ans 15% relationship development and 10% others. in my opinion i think the misunderstanding portion was prolonged and mind you, this was completed in 60 chapters with no extras. Felt the story relied on miscommunication and false assumptions with characters just jumping to conclusions whenever they wanted.
PLUS get this: at the last few chaps they separated due to differences, and the seme just goes back just like that? that was quite the cowardly move. imo, that's not maturity. it's plain dumbassery. The uke made a point of him wanting to be more serious abt his future in the long haul, and now the seme gets mad out of nowhere. they go on their separate ways.
after long four years, seme returned from US and boom, explains that he was wrong LOL
big dick move. all the emotional trauma he caused the uke was there, building up for the last four years.
SOOOO tho i like it, this story seems kinda rushed to me. that's all!
agia is one tall chocolate bar and i am here for it