Not srry, but when ur readers gotta start lookin' up definitions to even understand what u wrote; uhuh breh; that is a "no-go". It took me almost maybe ten or more minutes to understand three pages. I was done after the first one. Next time, please give some type of back-story to the characters we are; like something to go off of. Also put whose speaking into the speech also; it would really help for everything to go much smoother.
People who read doujinshi should know the original manga and the characters that inspired the dj in question. Also, this is mostly fanservice for girls to imagine herself with a cute guy or something like that... it's not supposed to have any storyline.
If you don't like this type of fanservice dj, it's fine, but there is nothing wrong with it. If you want a good story, go read "haikyuu!!"
Like I still won't watch the anime, but just damn man. You should be making some moolah off this! It is hardcore! It feels like I just watched the anime already. The covers you draw are astounding, like surreal man; especially with the eyes. You really know how to draw in readers' attention. Keep up the good work!!!
I hate u onion ninjas!! They got me soo many times!! Who da fuck finds fun in stabbing a cat through the skull w/ a nail??!?! I am so happy that everything came out beautifully!!!! I need to read this again slowly, but damn!!! NOTHING and I mean NOTHING will EVER beat this manga as the best romance "novel" of all times in my book!!!
What did he mean by he could 'no longer move'? Was this before or after he (black hair) met his friend? I need an explanation here! Plz help! Plz & thx u!!!
pages 3-22 were of events after they met again. pages 23-28 was a recap of how they ran into each other after the 4 year separation. so when he said "I became unable to move" it was referring to the fact that after finding him he decided to stay in the same town that he was in and 'move in together and start a relationship' because he didn't want to chance losing him again.
thanks for the explanation! i wasn't sure either until now