
Look, I know Ash is a good person. I know Carlisle is also a good person. We know their trauma. Dear Author, your writing is PHENOMENAL!!!! Talk about gut-wrenching for Carlisle to see Ash with Hazel.
Theory: Could Hazel have imprinted on Ash without his permission or overstepped some sort of boundary? I am so excited for the next chapter!!!!

What a pair of self-centered jerks. Neither one of them is in a position to be on a moral high ground. One refuses to communicate like a normal person and strings him along like a toy, the other comes onto him constantly despite KNOWING the emotional turmoil he is dealing with. Neither of them consider that they’re ruining the friendship, completely crossing boundaries that he has set, and either communicate too much or too little. Grow up… I feel terrible for OP. Why’d he have to catch feelings for such a jerk and have such an insensitive self-centered alternative as a friend. Uuuuuuuugh!

Everyone is busy being mad a Hoin but idk how many of you are in high school and would be able to stand up in the face of bullying that is that severe. Peer pressure is no joke, especially at that age. We all like to sit on our high horse and say that WE would do better, but you don’t know unless you’re in the exact situation. Even then, you only get a few seconds to act. He second guessed himself, it was wrong, but that doesn’t make him trash. It makes him normal. He’s only trash if he chooses not to improve himself after recognizing his mistake. ╮( ̄▽ ̄)╭

I’m so glad I’m not the only person who is confused. I thought they weren’t bitter enemies and that’s why he left her with them? But they actually hate each other and wanted him dead? And if they hated him so much why didn’t they just break her engagement with him? I don’t get what’s happening!!!!!! Lol!!! But it’s pretty so I’m back to read more. (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

Wouldn’t it be great if the red head was the demon king and that’s why he can’t touch the sword?
Also, can I just say that I absolutely LOVE that they made her into such a spoiled naive princess. She has the chance to grow SO MUCH! I can’t wait to see how she develops and how much of a BAMF she becomes. :)

Uuuuugh.... I’ve been waiting for him to snap and exact how revenge and she’s STOPPING HIM!!!! It’s not even for him anymore... It’s for ME!!!! I was hoping he’d gouge out his eyes, maybe rip off his dominant hand, I need some of these scientists to die gruesome deaths so they can experience the suffering they put those poor children and people through.

First, thank you for taking the time to translate. The story looks like it’s going to be very good. However, for all that has been written why has almost everything been a constant flashback?!?!? Just do ONE flashback or start the story from the beginning, but to hop back and forth in time again and again is just bad storytelling dear Author.
What in the name of money-wasting, time-consuming, terrible plot line is this? Why spend all that money, put in all that effort to go, just to have him come in without so much as an apology and you’re like “Yup. Can’t get away. Let’s bang.” The seme hasn’t developed through the course of this comic, uke hasn’t developed over the comic, and the art is getting worse?!
Save yourself the trouble. Don’t bother with this one. Unless you are a writer and want an example of exceptionally terrible plot lines and non-existent character arcs. A 10-year-old could write a better story than this. Smh.