
Well, I did read this in one sitting lol. But the story lacks the right pacing. The characters who suffered trauma and abuse, particularly Elliot and Lilliana, just got over it in a snap. Like no explanations and crying scenes whatsoever. And the problems just keeps coming, like can we just get a happy little moment with the fam?? Still gon read this tho and see where it’ll take me.
Imma drop this right now. The story was going well!! Why add the unnecessary incest and cheating?! And now on chap 10(raw) they’re just gonna brush it off as nothing?? Brooooo
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